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introverting
11-18-2015, 07:37 PM
http://images.tapatalk-cdn.com/15/11/18/f6489670e2b3b04a84c7ffc59e387f7f.jpg

http://w.tt/1NcqHNk < Link to Chapter 1!

Synopsis: Marina Aquino suffers from aquaphobia--the immense, abnormal fear of water. She avoids water at all costs, all thanks to a traumatizing childhood. But once it comes to the week of Marina's sixteenth birthday, many strange things begin to happen: her legs feel painful as they change color, it becomes more difficult for her to breathe, and she develops a strong desire for water. On the night of her birthday, she didn't expect to sprout a fish tail at all, or better yet, meeting Ianthe and Waverly, two mermaids-turned-human on the hunt for Marina herself. But why?

Marina must learn to make sacrifices, overcome her phobia to quench her curiosity of her past, and unravel secrets and discover her mermaid origins, following her inevitable destiny to return to the sea.

Tell me what you guys think! If any of you are wattpadders, hmu!

MermaidSasha
12-28-2015, 12:21 PM
Yay! Another Wattpad mer! I don't have any mermaid stories up there yet, but I'll go and give you a follow. Your story sound very interesting

malinghi
12-28-2015, 06:05 PM
The link didn't work for me. It took me to wattpad.com but there was an error message that said it couldn't find the story.

deepblue
12-28-2015, 06:58 PM
Aw, I wish you'd posted this in The Mer-Writers Thread (http://mernetwork.com/index/showthread.php?5504-The-Mer-Writers-Thread). There are so many threads here and there on writing and things we've written, it'd be nice to see it all in one place. I think when I created that thread, I should have called something that would show up on searches easier.

I also got a link that didn't work. Pretty cover, though. :)

And maybe the moderators can address this: would this be the appropriate place for a link to a story because it happens to be on the Internet? Just curious, totally not trying to tell introverting that she did wrong, because if they can be here, that would be good to know.

MermaidAmestris
01-09-2016, 02:25 PM
Was the story removed or something? I've tried following the link, searching keywords on wattpad, and also googling the story, and I can't find it mentioned anywhere except this thread.

introverting
01-09-2016, 02:32 PM
I deleted it, idk people thought it was too cliche, I don't know if I should continue it or not...

MermaidSasha
01-09-2016, 07:27 PM
How was it cliché? I think you should continue it. Everyone has a different opinion on stories. One might think it is cliché, one might think it is written gold. I say continue! Never give up on something you are passionate about.

Mermaid Julianne
01-10-2016, 12:39 AM
You should put it back up! I'm interested in reading it, if that makes a difference...