Can you help me improve this top

[Mermaid Cataleya]

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Hi this is my very first top I have ever made, so if you have anything yet as to what I can do to make it better please let me know. I am doing an event in which I can possibly be on the news indoor in the paper so I don't want it to look like a three-year-old made it. Any suggestions will be very helpful thank you I will be putting more shows down the front on the netting as well as in the pieces that hang behind my neck

[PearlieMae]

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[Mermaid Alea]

It definitely does not look like a three year old made it! I love it! :)
The only thing I would add to it is maybe some beads, smaller shells, sea glass, pearls, sequins, or something in that center area of the bra where you can see the nude material.

Wonderful job though especially for your first top!

[Mermaid Cataleya]

It definitely does not look like a three year old made it! I love it! :)
The only thing I would add to it is maybe some beads, smaller shells, sea glass, pearls, sequins, or something in that center area of the bra where you can see the nude material.

Wonderful job though especially for your first top!


Thank you you so much for your inspirational kind words. I commiserate hard of a time when I see something in my mind and it doesn't come out the way that I expect it to be very critical of my own words. But I will definitely be adding these ideas to inspirational kind words. I can Missouri heart of myself at times when I see something in my mind and it doesn't come out the way there I expect it to I can be very critical of my own words. But I will definitely be adding these ideas are all itself . Thanks so much again :) :)

[Mermaid Cataleya]

http://i63.tinypic.com/eurgbl.jpg

http://i68.tinypic.com/2v7xphu.jpg

(there...I fixed it! Click the little pic icon - the one with the tree - and select 'Insert image from URL' paste the image location into the bar and uncheck the 'Retrieve remote file and reference locally' box.)

thanks so much for your help with the pics . I tried to add the picture thing I'm on my iPad right now so it is difficult to add the URL the correct way and I kept coming up error. Thanks again for your help

[Mermaid Arabella]

I agree with Mermaid Alea: add a little over the material still showing, and you're gold! If you really feel like it needs an extra something, you could also add some baubles (shells, pearls, etc.) to the netting and/or seaweed. Hope we helped! :)

[kandell]

Definitely add seaweed or netting over the fabric visible around the middle. And I would glue some pears or jewels to the shells to dress them up a bit :] You could also add some pearl/gems/charms to the middle, between the shells.

[Merman Storm]

I like it.
I think I would add something on top of the shells, rope or netting, something that looks like its holding the shells in place.

[PearlieMae]

thanks so much for your help with the pics . I tried to add bandit with dad and picture thing I'm on my iPad right now so it is difficult to add the URL the correct way and I kept coming up error. Thanks again for your help

No worries! Happy to help!

[Ashton]

It looks great to me! I say all you need to do is fill in the visible fabric in the middle.

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