What the Crescent Hides.

[OceanicStory]

Well, I said I was going to try my hand at coming up with a mermaid story, and so I've posted an opening over at SeaTails, if anybody's interested. I'll probably post it over at DeviantArt sometime, too. :)
'What the Crescent Hides - Opening' : http://seatails.org/content/mermaid-story-what-crescent-hides-opening
(SeaTails is a mermaid-based website which is mostly clean, but there are a few bits and pieces, tucked out of the way, which might be considered rather mature. That link in particular wont take you to any such thing, but keep that in mind if you happen to browse.)

[Mermaid Annariea]

i LOVE it!! its so descriptive :D

[Alveric]

I gave it five stars on seatails.

[OceanicStory]

Thank you both very much. :D

[OceanicStory]

Part 2, "Storms", is online:
SeaTails: http://seatails.org/content/mermaid-story-what-cresent-hides-storms
Or,
DeviantArt: http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=what+the+cresent+hides#/d5rlws1

(I think I'll use this thread to announce any updates, such as this, but... be sure to tell me if it comes across as spam-like. I wouldn't want this to bother anyone.)

[SeaGlass Siren]

well thats why you have your own thread :) another girl uses her thread to post blog updates

edit: just finished reading! love what you did and how it tied back to the first chapter! keep it up!

[OceanicStory]

Part 3, "Messages", is online:
SeaTails: http://seatails.org/content/what-crescent-hides-messages
Or,
DeviantArt: http://slitherfin.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Crescent-Hides-Messages-351823519

Sorry I haven't done a wole lot of chatting around here lately. I suppose I've been a bit busy with things - my silly storytelling being one of them. ;)

[Mermaid Hamant]

Love it!!! Keep writing and I will keep reading. :)

[OceanicStory]

Thanks very much, Hamant. :D

[SeaGlass Siren]

again, i love how you don't specify what time period they're in until you mention dialing for a taxi and her failing biology. did girls attend school back in the day? i was imagining a sort of private school set in an era almost like Sweeney Todd's

[OceanicStory]

Part 4, "Changes", is online:
SeaTails: http://seatails.org/content/what-crescent-hides-her-changes
Or,
DeviantArt: http://slitherfin.deviantart.com/art/What-the-Crescent-Hides-Changes-355106585

[SeaGlass Siren]

i hope you never have to stop writing....

[OceanicStory]

Me neither. :lol: You're enjoying it, then?

[SeaGlass Siren]

oh i definately am. publish this, and i'll buy it. do it bro.

[OceanicStory]

Oh, you're being a little too gracious now, I think. It's hardly that good! :lol:
Thanks so much, though, Andrea. It's always so supportive to hear! :)

[Alveric]

Don't put your work down. It's plenty good enough. I mean, have you seen some of the tripe that gets published? :p