Help song writing?

[seagirls626]

I'm writing a theme song for our show, Mystic Waters, but I need help writing a theme song. It's going to be flowy and somewhat low. I'm also not that good at finding melodies. Could someone help me please?

I wrote this, but I'm not so sure it's good...



Dove Into the deeper waters This is where I want to be Out of site and out of mind Swimming with my own kind
Drifting off into oblivion This is where I want to be Trying my best to flee I am one with the sea

[seagirls626]

Oh, and maybe somebody could help me with the lyrics too?

[Traveling Merman]

Very gothic lyrics

[Morticia Mermaid]

I think the lyrics you have so far sound dark and almost mysterious... Not sure what Traveling means by Gothic... I listen to almost everything

But, how it will really sound will depend on the kind of instrumental music you put it to, and the notes it is sang in. I read that and I hear long drawn out and smooth vocals. Kinda like Adelle's Rolling in the Deep.

[Traveling Merman]

I mean its very evenessence-esque.