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Seatan
11-10-2013, 09:42 PM
I am writing a mermaid story! For young adults! (A nice break from all my very hardcore fanfic, LOL). Anyhoo, I posted the first chapter on my blog. Read if ye please! (For those who do want to read, if anybody, lol, would you rather read it on a outside website or me post it directly here? I write LONG stuff, novel length stuff, not short stories, so...)

Title: Tanked
Rating: PG
Author: Seavanna
Word Count: 4,257 (this chapter)
Summary: Rayla was just your average teenaged mermaid, plus or minus a few so-called “behavior issues,” at least until she found herself ripped from the sea and dumped in a creepy amusement park amongst a motley group of supernatural beings whose greatest talent seems to be wiping their own butts. It’s a long way from home, but one thing is for sure: She’s getting out of that fish tank, whatever it takes, and she’s taking her new friends with her.

Chapter 1: There's Always a Catch (http://pucktheplayer.livejournal.com/53566.html)

EDIT: Just updated this with a link that actually works!

:)

drucilla
11-11-2013, 01:00 AM
I like it, so easy to get sucked into! Please continue writing this, I want to find out what happens next

Azurin Luna
11-11-2013, 02:55 AM
Very nice :D You are so much better in conveying emotions then I'm. Sorry for the pun, but the story hooks you :D

Mermaid Kelda
11-11-2013, 03:45 AM
Ooh, this is really good! I rarely get into online fic but you write really well :) can't wait to see the next chapter!

AniaR
11-11-2013, 12:49 PM
kicks ass. What a great concept.

TheChimera
11-15-2013, 05:21 AM
Loved it, cant wait for the next chapter, please keep us posted. I'm a freelance writer myself and I would love to see some of your fanfic, or to get a link to some of it.

Mermaid Lorelei
11-15-2013, 05:24 PM
Very nice. Do let us know when the next chapter is up.

Mermaid Kelda
01-16-2015, 05:33 PM
Did you ever write any more of this, Seavanna? I loved it and would love to see more if you did.<3

TheChimera
01-09-2018, 12:51 PM
Checking in to see if there's any more written [emoji2]


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