HELP with my speech!!!

[SeaMansa]

So I have a speech to present on Tuesday and I am feeling really...blagh with myself for a multitude of reasons. Is there anyone here who can read it for (I'll message it to you...unless its safe to post it here?) and just tell me if it sounds okay? Its not long at all, I swear! its only 5 short paragraphs. I really have no where else to turn as my family would tell me its good even if it sucked and my friends would most likely do the same..... :( I shall be eternally grateful. Teachers and professors or just regular writers are welcome most of all!!! I'm not asking for anyone to do it for me or to give me information, Im just asking if it flows right or if I need to modifiy anything, etc. I am just being really paranoid and critical because this particular professor is such a... smug *bleep* and I'll be damned if I fail his class.
Sorry about that :P

[PhaylennMurúch]

I'll take a look

[SeaMansa]

Thanks, Phaylenn. Ill message it to you :D

[SweeteSiren]

Don't forget to let us know how your speech went!

[SeaMansa]

Speech got pushed back...twice.... I was supposed to speak on Tuesday, but he sent an email that it was postponed until Thursday, and then today (Thursday) after he told me I was in the first group to go, he doesn't call my name or my group and says we go next week >.< It's bittersweet. I have more time to practice and work on my stutter, but I am so ready to just get it over with. The funny thing is as soon as I walked into class, people were convinced I was going to be the first person called out of my group because everyone knows he think I will completely bomb my speech. When he didn't call my name, words cannot say how relieved my heart was lol But yes, I will definitely tell you guys how it went :P im actually a lot more confident about it

[SeaMansa]

So I finally did the speech annnddd...... I PASSED!!!! I got a B :) I thought I totally bombed it because I got extremely nervous and couldn't look up at the class so I just stared down but....I passed :) thanks for the help!!!!

[PhaylennMurúch]

yaay! congrats!